<KONY 2012>
Hello, everyone. I'm back here to tell you about 'Joseph Kony'. Did you ever hear about 'Kony 2012'? It's a project to make Kony famous. And Jason Russell -the person who made the project- is right. Well, do you know who Joseph Kony is? No? Then, I'm gonna tell you about him first.
http://www.nndb.com/people/398/000022332/
http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/world-africa-17299084
(If you want to know more things about this terrible guy, just click the link.)
For the first reason, it's that many people will support Jason's idea. Now, many people know about Joseph Kony because of the project, 'Kony 2012'. So, they want to catch Kony. After many people support Jason's idea, the powerful people who's helping Jason's idea. Now, there is many famous people who's helping Jason, like Obama, Ban gi-mmon, or Oprah Winfrey!
Next reason is that it supports my idea that if Kony is famous, Kony can think about why he was doing these crimes and feel bad for himself. If he gets famous for bad things, people won't like him. So he thinks that 'Why did I do it? I was wrong!'
Of course, he ran away. But I strongly believe that he'll be caught soon. Because there are many people who support catching Kony. There are strong people who support Jason's idea for the kidnapped kids in Uganda. So, he will be caught soon.
There is one more of opposition's reason. That's about there will be more supports for Kony if he began famous. But it's not true. There will be more supporters for Jason and Uganda's kids then Joseph Kony's supporters!
In conclusion, Make Kony famous and the project 'Kony 2012' is a good idea. Because it can make many people to support and Kony can think that he was wrong. And please, after reading this post, make a comment.:) Thank you.
Wow Iris! I think your post is very orginized~
ReplyDeleteIt looks good~
Thank you, Chae Eun^-^.
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ReplyDeleteThis is a good argumentative essay. Some suggestions are to work on your transitions between paragraphs and include the opposing views and your rebuttal. The introduction is interesting but the conclusion needs more details. Good luck!