Saturday, July 28, 2012

ABOUT ME...!




   Today, I'll write about three truths about me. I think the 3 things I'll write about are interesting. So please enjoy this post and write a comment. :)

   First, it's GLPS. This 18th GLPS is my second GLPS. I came to the 17th GLPS, too. At my first GLPS, -17th GLPS- I was in class 9. Our class president was Jessie. Also, class 9 had won the 1st prize in the pop song contest. And I was living at the room number 605 with Ji-yun, Ga- yeong, Yun- ju, Yu-min and Yeo-gyung. We called 'Dracula Sisters' at the camp. This is my second GLPS and I'm in class 12. I'm a class president! Also, I'm living in room number 805 with Jae-min, Da-in, So-hyeon, Ji-won and Min-yeong.


   The second truth about me is about me in my school. I was in class 7 when I was in 1st grade. I was in classes 2-6, 3-9, 4-8, and 5-7. Also, I'm a class president at my current class, 6-10. My school is in Gangneung, Gangwon-do. Out schoolmaster is named Ki-ju, Um. I'm going to Gangneung Joong-ang Elementary School. Also, I was the school's vice president when I was a 5th grader. I was class president when I was in 2nd, 3rd, and 4th grade, such as now. ;)

   Finally, I will talk about my family. The first family member that I'll introduce is my father. His name is Seok-woo, Ha. He is a doctor and he's 42 years old. My mother is Hye-suk, Kim. She is a pianist. Also, I have a younger brother who is a 3rd grader -that means he is 10 years old. He is a boy who is popuar with girls. I think he is cute. I love my family very much.

   This was my post about me. Was it interesting? I hope so. I think GLPS is good to me. I like my school life. And lastly, I love my family very much. Thank you for reading my post and please leave some comment. :)

2 comments:

  1. Hi Iris! I'm your Writing TA Won-Woo. Since you were at the 17th GLPS, perhaps you might know me. :) Overall, I see that you gave an enormous amount of details but maybe too much. However, I don't see any serious grammatical errors except for "We WERE called 'Dracula Sisters' at the camp" since you are referring to yourself. I'm sure throughout the camp your writing will further improve! Also, hope you enjoy your second time at GLPS! :D

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  2. Hi Iris- Your post was interesting to read. It is great yo are a class president! Try to give more information in your introduction to get he reader's attention. Keep up the great work!

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